by xAmx May 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I love the way you look at me, |
It was okay....I knw there were deep feelings.....but the word choices could be better......keep up the mood though. |
by Renee
Very sweet poem. I wish I had that feeling sometimes. cherish it while you have it. |
by Robert
this was a nice poem soft and gental but some of the words did not flow too good and it left the timing off but it was a sweet poem none the less... |
by Frankie
I love that feeling too..:D |