I love that feeling too..:D

this was a nice poem soft and gental but some of the words did not flow too good and it left the timing off but it was a sweet poem none the less...

Very sweet poem. I wish I had that feeling sometimes. cherish it while you have it.

Take care,
Renee

It was okay....I knw there were deep feelings.....but the word choices could be better......keep up the mood though.