wow..that was a great poem. Its very well written and has alot of emotion in it, i cant believe someone voted a 4 for it..definately 5 material all the way...very depressing

This was a great poem I especially liked the part where you wrote: "I'm always holding back tears
i feel so fake when i smile
because deep down inside I'm crying
hoping you'll come back in a while..."
Super! Good job:)

I love this poem alot it reminds me of my stupid love life lol but great job anyways 5/5