by Amanda May 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
We started out as just friends |
by Samantha
It was a good story, but the way you wrote it seemed to jump around to much from one idea to another and back to the last one... it was a little confusing... the story was sad and i think if you edit it up a little bit it would be perfect... keep it up... 4/5 |
by No Motiv?
the content was not necessarily laid out well, but the emotion behind the words captivates and catches the heart of your readers. Absolutely brilliant. |
by nazz
well amanda you've go tme in a whirl right now because i just can't figure out what kind of poem this is? |
I thought it was really great. 5/5 |
its really good i hope other people like it just as mush as i do. good luck on writing more poems. |