hey amanda! my names amanda too, lol, i live in New Hampshire. i saw ur post askin for comments so here i am. i like this, it dosnt flow very well, but its a nice story, sad though. um yea, so could u please vote and comment on 'i guess this is good bye' and 'my heart is with you' thnx a lot! :) *~Peace and love~*

It had a good message to it. I remember the rose my first love gave me. In fact this may sound crazy at my age but I still have it. I have it in a box. It's good to have something to look back on from the past as along as you don't dwell on it. Make sure you're able to move on with your life. The flow wasn't that good but the poem it's self had a heartfelt story which made it have meaning! Keep posting! ~Brooke~

its really good i hope other people like it just as mush as i do. good luck on writing more poems.

I thought it was really great. 5/5
Blackroseblood

well amanda you've go tme in a whirl right now because i just can't figure out what kind of poem this is?

is it a sonnet? becase it consists of more than four lines?? or is it a ryhming poem? but oh forget it!

5/5

the content was not necessarily laid out well, but the emotion behind the words captivates and catches the heart of your readers. Absolutely brilliant.

It was a good story, but the way you wrote it seemed to jump around to much from one idea to another and back to the last one... it was a little confusing... the story was sad and i think if you edit it up a little bit it would be perfect... keep it up... 4/5

sammie