by Dark Savior May 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Three is a concept you see, it applies to you and me |
It changes the rhyme scheme, but "ourselfs" should be ourselves...your poem though, it's understandable so it doesn't really matter I guess.... |
i like this part - 'everyone has told a lie or two, it's human nature. |
by UM
Good message. I agree with Heather, some little flaws and quirks are where true beauty lies. |
Wicked awesome. It may not be that great but is was in a way. |
by R F
so Welcome back ! |