hey shaun...it's not your best, but i still think it's good =)...keep on writing....and take care ~much love~ ~bunches of hugs~

-brittnay-

Just a suggestion...it's imperfect in the last couplet, not inperfect.

Anyhow, not a bad concept...the idea that imperfection lies in all of us, and the fact that we must learn to accept it. I've always thought through flaws, you find true beauty.

I hope you're well!

Love, Heather.

Hey Dark Savior,

some funny statment says Nobody is perfect, am Nobody ! lol,dont know if you heard that before. Well i agree that no one is perfect.
and hey calm down mate poems may please anyone, but sometimes it doesn't even please the one who wrote it, just like lots of other things we do but not so satisfied with ! right? but the thing that is cool, that you don't care, i like that i swear :-P

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

so Welcome back !

Wicked awesome. It may not be that great but is was in a way.

Good message. I agree with Heather, some little flaws and quirks are where true beauty lies.

i like this part - 'everyone has told a lie or two, it's human nature.
about woman or guys, or not being able to be there.'
i love the poem it explains a couple things of life i love it.
¤Elisha¤

It changes the rhyme scheme, but "ourselfs" should be ourselves...your poem though, it's understandable so it doesn't really matter I guess....

You speak the truth...except for the part where you say it's stupid, 'cause it isn't. Fine job.

xxx