im so sorry about ur sister, my best friends little sis died of bone cancer last year but id known her forever so it was like losing a sister, the poem was so beautiful and well writen, xxxxxxxx

aww im so sorry that u lost yr sis. thats gotta be very hard. i hope its not tru, but if it is, so sorry bout yr loss

good poem! keep writing. check out mine sometime please!

that was wonderful..relaly good job..and just know that your sis did read that! -k-

This was so well written! im sorry that you are in pain, but she is reading it! keep writing, your really good!