When i look into your eyes

by Neil   May 24, 2005


When I look into your eyes,
I see your soul,
Crying there all alone,
Waiting there on its own.

I see your heart.
All torn apart,
Bearing all the pain,
That cannot be contained.

I see your tears,
All frozen in fear,
All going down,
Making up that sad frown.

When I look at your eyes
I feel I must stop those cries
Because it pains me so
Just to see you all alone

When I saw you like that
I have found my reason to live
And that is to stop those tears
That have haunted you my dear

I will now hold you tight
Through the long cold night
And will Never let you go
Because I love you so

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wonderful poem. well expressed. excellent! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Damn! well, Like I said earlier... A salute to your brilliance... I like, I like, I like, I love :D

    well done,
    ~*TasH*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Awwww this is sweet!
    Everyone gets those feelings man, you put them on paper well done!!

    Full of emotion and mixed up toughts..teenage life =P

    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Fishie33

    Wow neil i love it babe its great!!! i havent felt like this for someone in a very long time this poem takes me back i love your choice of words it just great overall!!!! keep going hun!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Your an amazing writer. awesome poem.

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