Very well written! You can tell you really put time into this! I loved you choice of words! You did an amazing job! Keep posting you have talent! I look forward to reading more of your work. Take Care! Brooke~

Very interesting the choice of words you used. I think it really makes the poem stand out. Good Job and yes, please keep posting.

--Sher

that was really good i likes it alot...it was very cool

the wording was awsome-talented, the first time I read it, I didn't understand it, I can't really isolate way, may the flow I don't really know, but the second time I read, I understood it, your writting is good, I like your style

Very very good! I really love your work! :)

wow...Deep allright..

My greatest problem is that I am not native english speaking, so I do have a few problems understanding some parts of it...

But still...very well written, with a flawless flow and no trace of forced rhymes, as far as I could see...

I`ve read it over and over again, and I only keep liking it more and more...

REally good job..let me know if you want more poems read=)

It's very detailed and gives me good mental images.

This piece proved to be another interesting read, that had good imagery.

Keep Writing
Nici

Thanks for checking out my poems.. Meant very much to me.. I really like this poem.. 5 stars for this one.. *****.. I you got time it would mean a lot to me if you checked out my poem "My Dad: dead and gone forever" please comment/vote.. It's also based on true feelings.. hugs to you!

very easy to understand, and very well written! loved it and very creative! 5/5

well writen very descriptive.

Wow...very deep and meaningful, the words you choose are so expressive and they make the stanzas and lines stand out so well. It had a nice flow and I could see you put heart into it...and that is the most important factor. Take care xxx

I loved it sooo much! its very in-depth and is very deep, ive felt that way b4, so yea. It describes the emotions perfectly!

great poem...I love the emotion that overwhelms me...brilliant patterns of anger.

5/5.

nicely written! good job!

This is very good! It's very descriptive & the flow on it is really good. My favorite lines were:
Loathing the shadow grabbing his feet,
For it sees him more often than I do.
I loved this poem...i can relate to it. Great job! 5/5**

Wow...this was extremely well written. amazing. the flow of it was brilliant and the depth and emotion drummed into it was undescribale. it was really descriptive. There is nothing really to point out on this piece. it was written so well. Kat

Filled with such passion and anger, really amazingly written. The description and rhyme work so wonderfully and are so unforced, truely evocative imagery. You are quite clearly a very talented writer who (unlike many) really *think* about what they are trying to convey and then do so, flawlessly, 5/5

Incredible write. Great mental imagery and flow and ryhme, It really is angsty lol, but i'm angsty and i like angsty, and it's a great poem. great job. can't wait to read more.

I really love the way you passionately describe the pain of rejection in this poem