Wow great twist at the end, it really surprised me=0) I love it....Keep up the good work, you have talent girl...

*Love Sabrina*

oh shyt that is a wicked good poem... like i think that may be my new favorite...5/5

great poem! i love it! truly amazing and beautiful! sad but still great! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

nice very well written and it has flow keep it up please ttyl

Very good I did a couple of poems along the same line ones called You Wanted This and I Never Knew if you get time read it. I gave you a 5 great job!!!

Wow...that was...surprising=) in a good way...

I really like the rhyming scheme, which gives the poem a very good flow...

"I am tired of little cuts,
I am tired of this game.."

Very well written...Somehow I get the feeling that you didn't use much time writing this...and that is everything but an insult...It is a simple poem, yet a good one...And as for the ending...Well...I love it...

"Love always, your razor blade"..

The best poem about cutting I've read so far

This is a very good poem keep it up
5/5

wow, extremely powerful! again, i give you a 5!

L x

awesome. I liked it a lot.

Another lovely poem
5/5
this is so gripping til the end...
love
amy

Awesome i like it
i write stuff like that!
hahaha emotions run deep.. mmm

I really liked the flow and the words you used.. The rhymes were original and it was a very good poem. It wasn't so cliché as most poems in that genre are... I really liked it! It was very well written and the emotion was sensational! Great job and keep writing!

~BJ~

Very emotional, and a poem that I can really relate to. Good work.
Vanessa
xoxoxo