Thank you, Erin. I try not to write in first person, so this one was a little rough.

I agree with Erin awesome poem...Very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

I thought you did a great job, I look forward to reading more!

Thank you for comments, check out my latest one 'Incomplete without you' let me know if you like it!!

Your friend
Hayley

Brad,
First of all, thank you for the comment. I was a bit argumentive with myself whether or not to check out your poems because well, no offense to many but so many people on the site is not worth the read, but i was glad i let the good side of me win because i think you have wonderous talent, muh dear. I don't even know what to say. This piece is well thought out and a wonderful read. Thanks for sharing with us. 5/5 and please stay in touch with me.

<3 Heather.

Brad i agree with Erin, you have the strength of God on your side and you cant fail.
with love in Christ
AShleY

absolutely brilliant I love it