Comments : Saving me from death

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I loved the start of this, very dark. I never read poems in the love section, but this one, I have to say, is good. Not much of a fan of the use of "u" instead of "you", but I do think highly of the imagery in this poem, well done.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Eric McGlaughlin

    Well done....Shows a lot of emotion. Heh......but keep in mind....these....animals...as you call them around us....Need a shephard..... I let that person be me. We might be alone in our state of minds, in our worlds, but I for one choose to help those around me... We have to lead them, or they'll fall into darknessand become worse...Sure...I'm in the darkness, but people like us normally are. Lead some to light, and you'll have a different outlook on the world.

  • 18 years ago

    by kylie

    Hey that is a really cool and deep poem! There should be a new poem in now.