by Ria May 24, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Sounds of feet as the subway empties |
by Sourav
You've really impressed me. This one is too good. You have a very creative mind. And you know how to write. I love the description of this poem. It's wonderful! |
by HansRik
This was an excellent poem. As everyone said, your talent is excellent. The poem flows well, and the structure helps to develop meaning. The ending is particularly shocking. I liked it. Very well done. |
by Truest Lies
Beautiful, but it sounded very sad, as though you were going through a moment of a lot of emotional turmoil when you wrote it. Thats just the feeling I got from it. Again, a wonderful poem, and I absolutely loved the scenery of gloom. Vey good! |
by AhmadAfaneh
WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing. |
by Ashli
really good! 5/5..i'd give ya a 6 if i could..lol...keep up the good work, and i hope to read more of your work! |