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  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    so sad..yet so true i relate so much to what you write. u have made a conection with me now! good work
    love always sammi

  • 19 years ago

    by ntv650

    Heyhey Laura mine wasnt really about my idea of paradise. Read it carefully... Im actually refferring to the start of the world. How no-one was there to witness it and how when we have died there will be nothing to know we existed.. but yea is still quite spooky, like ur abstract adjectives in this one!