Bunny Sqwalkings

by Biscuit   May 24, 2005


In a land, far away;
Where the faries go to play,
Lived a rabbit who, one day,
Decided to hop along his way,

He said goodbye to all his friends
And to his enemies, made amends,
But when he reached the sheep he tends
He just set off around the bends.

He soon got tired and thought it best
That he should stop to eat and rest;
He took off his socks and vest
And spread them over an ants nest.

As he set out his food and drink
He started to ponder, started to think;
What if he'd been born a mink?
Would his fur be pink?

Puffing his after-dinner cigar
He lay and looked at the evening star,
Wondering why it was so far
And would it be so in a car?

Just as he started to whistle a tune
He gazed longingly at the moon
And then he exploded
BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!

(age 13)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ksusha

    Haha thats such a kindherted poem its really cute :o) great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Thank u thank u...u make my day happy ur poem is funny this is so good u know hehe keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Lol, that was quite funny.. =) The flow, I found was awkward in places.. Either the line was too short or too long.. Also, with the rhyme scheme that you used, it made you form some pretty strange lines.. Some of the lines I felt did not really make sense with the rest of the stanza.. So the whole thing turned out pretty random.. I also did not like the last line.. It was far too short and it did not make sense at all.. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Made me smile

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was very cute. The title caught my eye and i just had to read it. Though the end was a tad bit morbid, I liked it a lot. 5/5

    Ravyn

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