Well....the rhyme scheme could use a teeny, tiny bit of work; but this is a good poem. It portrays a cute message, without overwhelming the reader. Good job.

Haha, this is so funny. I like a good light-hearted poem...not so many of them about nowadays...clever rhyming...best I've read today...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Liked this poem, funny and made me smile
well done
xxxx

Hehe its not the usual thing i would read, but very good all the same, nice bit of comedy.

Hahaha such a random poem, the title really caught my eye, it's really mad but such a good read...I don't think I'll ever read another like it
Thanks for making me smile :)

That was very cute. The title caught my eye and i just had to read it. Though the end was a tad bit morbid, I liked it a lot. 5/5

Ravyn

Made me smile

Lol, that was quite funny.. =) The flow, I found was awkward in places.. Either the line was too short or too long.. Also, with the rhyme scheme that you used, it made you form some pretty strange lines.. Some of the lines I felt did not really make sense with the rest of the stanza.. So the whole thing turned out pretty random.. I also did not like the last line.. It was far too short and it did not make sense at all.. 4/5

Thank u thank u...u make my day happy ur poem is funny this is so good u know hehe keep it up

Haha thats such a kindherted poem its really cute :o) great job