by Fighter (Ariane L.) May 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The first time our eyes met, |
by Carlee Ann
I thought this was fabulous! tHIS IS truly a great piece... I love the original format and scheme. Awesome job! |
by ScarletHaze
lol, this is actually really gd xxxxxxxx |
by Eden
I liked it :) I thought it was pretty good:) Keep up the awesome work. tata |
by †JustAriâ€
AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!! ^.^ That's so SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!! Great work, Shawdy! I can so relate...this reminds me of me and my boy. PEACE!!! |
by ?
It is good! I really liked it, and that way it wasn't forced to rhyme. One thing... the line 'And dry to sink me under again.' is it meant to be 'try'? Keep it up xxx |