I relate to that..... I think it was beautifully great <3 ^.^ You sounded good... I could feel everything while I read...

awww that was great!!!

- Awesome poem S-Dawg I really liked it even if it was about Jake. :| one thing tho...
You are my everything
You make me free
I know that you will be there
To love and protect me

Not tru... nice job 5/5

.:yourdirtysecret:.

I HATE HIM!!! he is so mean...im sorry :( Mandy

That is a great poem. keep up your talent. you've got a lot of it! 5/5!
ALLiSON

Very sweet. So soft and gentle, great poem, the flow and rhme was great. I really loved the warm feeling that this poem brings across. Great work.

Peace. [Sole]