by Leah20 May 24, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
It's like a needle in the palm of your hand |
by Veamm
Same as the old ones.. |
by Maria
I really liks this one too. I like the way you write. Your going in my favs for sure =] 5/5 |
I like this...l very good job |
by Jessica
Aww.. that was a good poem, the message came through clearly! keep it up! 5/5 |
by Anne Conner
Hey that was great I think you hit the subject right on the nail wheen you wrote this. Unlike others I like poems that are short and to the point. Those kind of poems seem to last in peoples minds longer than a long poem. Although I have seen some excellent long poems on here. |