like i said to other people who wrote short poems

the longer the poem the more it shows that you know what you're talking about.

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I loved this poem and I loved the message. It was wonderfully written. 5/5:)

I did a poem on Pride and Sin that had the same taste to it please if you get a chance take a look at it will you If you could gaze at my featured poems it would mean alot to me thanks please comment and vote too....

Hey that was great I think you hit the subject right on the nail wheen you wrote this. Unlike others I like poems that are short and to the point. Those kind of poems seem to last in peoples minds longer than a long poem. Although I have seen some excellent long poems on here.
~anne~

Aww.. that was a good poem, the message came through clearly! keep it up! 5/5
jessy xox

I like this...l very good job

I really liks this one too. I like the way you write. Your going in my favs for sure =] 5/5

Same as the old ones..
deep emotions and deep words..!!
keep it up!!