Comments : One broken friendship

  • 19 years ago

    by trixy17

    beautiful write, i really liked it
    keep up the good work cause your a great poet!

    keep smiling
    ~Maria*~

  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    Wow! This really relates to an issue I'm having right now. I used to be so close to one of my friends but then the little things that I started finding out made every action she made seem like she was purposely hurting me. Even though there was so much tension, neither of us would let the other know how we felt. I really like this poem because it relate to it so well and it can be applied to many problems other people could be having in a friendship. Well I hope everything works out for you.