Knife Impale

by Wintersolstice   May 25, 2005


Death calls to the middle aged man,
He’s sick of life’s pointless fight,
It whispers to him from some dark place,
A dark tunnel ending in light.

It cries out to the sobbing teen,
She is so tired of being alone,
Her angsty thoughts, the painful dream,
that haunts her night and is her day.

The ever ready knife is on the prowl,
Searching for the loner boys heart,
He is sick of not being known to the world,
And waiting for life to start.

Ex-wife and depressed mother,
It’s them-or her-she must decide,
Working overtime as a whoare,
No point of living without pride.

Old woman trapped in empty house,
Wishes she was not alone again,
She killed herself with knife impale,
Only increasing her sentence of pain.

Copyright Mairi Mackenzie 2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Good poem! 5 Very scary!

  • 19 years ago

    by Frankie

    Hey there, I think that this is a very good poem actually, I like the way you don't write it about your depression, but thinking about what others might feel. Bravo.

  • 19 years ago

    by JeBeGood

    u are very talented and write like a published poet! keep it up, i cant wait to read more!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ellie

    Hm... you seem to be the angsty type of writer. It's very good compared to the rest who have to be slapped with a rhythm stick. Excellent job!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Amazing poem I cant belive the rating on this...Im gving you a 5/5 for sure... Im loking forward to reading more...
    Xox
    Sherrie