It was really good. I like the part where u said that yesterdays are full of sorrows and I am sentenced to endless tommorows. It was a really good poem and reflected yourself well. read/comment on some of mine plzz

Wow.. I'm amazed... This is one of the best poems I've ever read... I absolutely love it!

Thanx for your comments on my poems. this is one of my favorites from you. I like your creative way with words. Writing the grandma poem was sort of interesting. i was doing chores or something and sort of though of the first three lines. I'm not sure where my with you poem came from, but I tried and I'm glad someone appreciated it. Keep writing. I want to read more of your stuff.

well, guess what? now I'm rambling on to you :) but I was wondering if you could read If Tommorow Starts Without Me. My friend Shaely wrote it and I want to know what u and other ppl think of it so I can tell her.

Thanx :)

Hey! thanks for ur comment. I'll tell shaely wut u said about it. I bet she will b happy. :) I like ur poems they r great! have u read ne more of my poems, cause u give good advice.

Thanx for ur comment. obviously u have lol. that's a dork stamp for me lol. it was one of my first poems. I was sort of strange then, not that I've changed :) lol. but on shaely's poem, this didn't happen, she just likes writing sad things and death-but she's not really a goth person or ne thing. I don't know, but she can write good pieces.