by Willow May 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My friend Shaely wrote this poem, so please comment or rate it for her |
wow, that's very powerful. I like the structure aswell as it seems rather irregular but it all firs together. I really like the line 'if tomorrow starts without me' it sounds very sad and mysterious at the same time. i hope this was not based on a real occurence, if it was, i am deeply sorry. however the poem is very good and deserves its 5 rating. I'll agree! |