Hey, this is amazing!! keep on writing and take care!! you have a lot of talent..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

IT WAS AMAZING AND REMINDED ME OF PPL I LOST. IT WAS VERY TOUCHING.

Beautiful poem! You are such a talented writer...I like the optimism in this~Holly

cool

That was a very good poem, i really like your writing

Very nice poem, but I don't think it belongs in the sad section. Perhaps the inspirational section? Just a thought. Wonderful job though. 5/5.

~rolo

the two last lines are great, but I think the rest of the poem has a quite bad flow.

Besides, some of the rhymes seems somewhat forced..

keep it up

Very good.

I liked the poem.. i gave ya a 5/5.. very good!! bye bye EJ oh ps thanks for commenting on my poem!! i really appreciated it!!

Awesome poem ... I like how you worte it from the perspective (sp) of someone who died . i wonder if thats what It will be like .Amazing job
April

gerat poem. 5/5

aww that is how i think heaven would be, with all my lost puppyt dogs and old family and friends, i really enjoyed this poem!!!!! its my fav so far!!!

I love this poem so much it's probably my fav on this site

now this one is my favorites.. i loved the emotion.. it made me cry
the rhyme was gr8
never stop writing..
take care

wow, i really love this poem!! it's such a great view of heaven!! it's great that you wrote this too, so people can read it and hopefully it can impact them in some way! great job! 5/5

love always,
abcede

*maybe you could check out some of my stuff some time?!*

great poem I think I've read it before
5/5
thx for c/r on my poems

good poem ... it will allow ppl to rest assure there love ones are fine ... 5/5

AWW.. that almost made me cry.. it was reli beautiful n sad.. i loved ur last two lines.. they spoke volumes.. i love ur rhyme.. never forced..
keep up the talent
nannoush