Good poem i like the discriptivness and its cool

Shyla

I like it. It is an interesting idea of death. thanks for your comment

Interesting concept of death. Nonetheless, the poem is nice ^_^ i love it

first of all loose should be noose. Other then that it was a very good write great job on the story you told with the spirits you did very well good job all around was a good read...

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hey, great poem I like it, is sounds sad though....but i like it...keep writting...lates girl...

creepy...good poem...nightmare...images... goosebumps....

this is good too....it rhymes good.........

this is wonderful victoria.
absolutely brilliant.
I loved it.
take care,
marjan