by M J U May 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I was sitting on the beach in Waikiki |
by gabs
aww i give it a 5 it was really cute, you can almost picture it happening like a movie tell me when you publish your book id love to buy it you are a great poet dont stop writing your really talented.... read some of my stuff and tell me what you think... thanks |
by Amanda Bee
Sounds like a lovely rendezvous you had. Makes me want to visit Waikiki myself. LOL! Great job:) |