Really good poem each line is simple but effective.

take care

I really like this style, makes ir really interesting to read, the raw emotion and description adds to how great this is written, 5/5
Lmay xx

oh how sad! nice format, very interesting and new. good poem, keep it up!

thats poetry at its greatest!!!! ive wrote a new poem, so would you please read it!!!! and it truely is brilliant

very sweet and very sad