Very creative way of going about the theme! Although I believe you are worth much more than you portrayed.

God Bless.

awesome poem and u r worth more then wawt u think u r if u ever need to talk u can talk to me at xxDARKESTDEATHxx@aim.com or delisa_allen@yahoo.com
Dee

Woow, i really like this one The way you write is.. is just great!
i know i can't do that
A 5 is what this poem deserves for sure
Please comment or rate on my poems too, Thanks! And keep up the good writing!