I liked this one. it was different in a way. but good. who is the abyss you are talking about? or am I being a blonde? lol
and I may have higher ratings, but u've got awards :)

This poem, could be interpratted a few ways. however i will not bore you with them. just my own. It is a sense of how someone feels when they are in a relationship but its kind of pressured and strained. possibly abusive or love less - just unhappy - or maybe someone with a bit of attitude who she can't help but like. i'll leave it to you to make your own conclusions.

that's wicked jemma, could almost be a dark poem, maybe you should do a follow up? that would rock too!

emma x

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