by HOLLY ARMER May 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You said it, |
Really, Holly, It's not bad at all. Many free verse simply suck but you hold a greater title. Use more poetry devices such as alliteration, similies, hyperboles, and metaphors would be a grand suggestion. I would love to see more free verse poetry by you. I'm growing to like it. =) 5/5 |
by Forever29
Hi Holly. I really love your rhyming poems, but free verse is great when you need to vent. I feel like I now have writer's block. I'm running out of inspiriation. |