( this is a work in progress , need some feedback )
his eyes frosted
with
harsh fear
never to be
looked at
always unclear
he begged
to be seen
he longed
for a hand
no one really
ever understands
loaded his gun
shouted his rage
then slowly
cocked back
the 24 gage
pulled the trigger
eyes shut tight
painlessly took his
young life
that night
