Good poem and nice story :)
Keep it up *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Good poem I've heard of this happening to people I like how you have made a poem out of it, thanks for the comment means a lot to me!

take care

i think you have a talent. you should really try to go into story writing or something similiar! i like it- kinda creepy and supernatural* im into that kinda stuff! well wenever you get the chance would you comment on some of my recent poems? it would mean alot to me.

I enjoyed this piece, it was relatively short, yet still packed with so much feeling.

The imagery was beautifully captured, it creates very vivid pictures for the reader.

And that ending...wow, so beautiful, moving and thought provoking all at the same time.

I found this to be both original and unique, and you did a beautiful job with this.

I love the way tat you use this poem in first person pronoun which makes it more personal, nicexx alex xxx

A very nicely written piece. You portrayed the emotions so well and I like the structure you used. The beginning really drew in my attention. And you ended it so perfectly. Definitely, a well deserved 5/5.

I really like this poem...its unique..

the flow was great and i like the rhyming... good choice of words ..

loved it. 5/5

I liked this poems nice job 5/5

Waw its nice way how you tell us the story and powerfull words each line is interest me,well done 5/5