Secretly was good - again it won't let me comment- don't spose u av ne ideas why...anyway secretly was really good,

This poem however is very erm, well intricate you get the feeling every little thing matters and the imagery is fantastic. ahwell c ya

Jemma both 5/5 btw. this is the best in my opinion however.

What happened to the 'i'm not writing as mild insmnia ' thing. not that i'm complaining

good poem! I like it

-Josiah

great poem its the best up here today it should have been at the top!!!!

5/5

~krystal~

That was really good, its sad to, but i hope all is well, and that you keep it up
5/5
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