aaw, that's really sad, i hope she gets better too. that's one really emotional poem, and thankyou so much for your comments. all the best, stay strong and keep your head up. take care

emma x

It's a very well done poem, i know that it comes from the heart that is what truely makes it a poem in my opinion. I think that it is something that i admin in a young writer.

Very well put and fell well felt and met, i know that it is a very well personal.

P.S. If you get to read my poem about africa and notice that it was before any of these 'natural disasters' that are occuring. I do work with non-profit organizations so i know what it is like, to have someone cry and not to have anything, to talk to you without having anything to their name.

Trust me, before i say something like "i wish someone knew what it was like to be me" i don't just throw it out there. Thank you very much to for your information though, i am glad that you took notice of one of my poems.
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