Pretty good poem, even though it's not necessarily what I believe :) I always love reading your poems. Keep up the awesome work, k? tata

Eden

Heather, Everyone has their own beliefs and you expressed your feelings well. Great poem once again. hugs, love, *Ann*

Well done, you said your piece beautifully! I also liked "Present Days" it's a wonderful poem! It's very insightful for you not to take your time with friends for granted!
Oh and thanx for the tips on my free verse poem....I appreciate it loads! Love and Peace~Holly

What exactly do you believe? I don't get it, sorry? You dont have a religion but you believe in God? Please get back to me with that.... But really good poem... I enjoyed it very much!
Love Sarah
Xoxo

Very well expressed, we all believe something different and you did a wonderful job stating that. Beautifully done.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Hey thanks for your imput on my poem. I really need it! I am sorta getting what you believe in. Is there a name for your belief? Did you create it yourself? The reason I'm asking is cause I have never met someone like you and I find you very interesting!
Keep in touch!
Love Sarah
Xoxo

heather, i do agree what ann said, beautiful write, well expressed! hun, well done..:)

have a good day, your be safe, bert.

Wow great poem...Honest and raw. Very thought provoking with much visonary passion. Diction and flow flawless.

Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragment, check out my latest poem 'Incomplete without you' let me know what you think.

Your friend
Hayley

best or not your poem was still great i really believe in your talent its amazing
5/5
take
HS

best or not your poem was still great i really believe in your talent its amazing
5/5
take
HS

I like the fact you simplified your beliefs from such an indepth description. [I make no sense most of the time]. I respect your beliefs and i respect you and your poetry :)

Loveview hun <3
~ Kal.