Very good poem - I loved all of the different things being described, you've given me a good idea.
Keep writing :)

Very exciting....hehe. Good stuff. I love the way this is so down to earth

"Oohs and aaaaaahs are heard as the fireworks start."

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Again, an excelent, well written poem.
You are very talented,
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

Wow you were one talented kid i must say you rock! much love
Tara~~screenname~~tenten~~

You sure brought back some memories to me of Bonfire Night years ago! What a great poem, and at age 10! I'm curious as to what your teacher thought of it? Hope she was proud and encouraged you as she should have!