its good maybe put it in2 stanzas and work on the length of lines..
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i used to be like this and now ive changed but i know that it really hurts to be alone and i hated every minute that i was alone and depressed.
I hope everything is works out.
~blackroseblood~

i know what it feels like to be alone nice poem 5.5

An issue I takle often in my poems and in life. Suppose eveyone feels that way sometimes. It seems to end with an answer to the question it started with...lots of feeling in it. Good poem.

What an excellent poem....keep going...