it sucks that you feel so alone, hopefully someday youll feel the songs from above, try to fix the spelling mistakes and I would insert an "I" between have and ever in this line
Feeling none of them have ever felt
lots of emotion, good job

it sounds good... but in the secnd line it says "My ind drifting to all o have seen..." I was a little confused about the "ind and o"

Good job! I thought it was really good even with the little mistakes.. And Im soo sorry that you feel alone, but know that God is always with you, you cant see him, and u might not even feel his presence, but He is there, and He knows how you feel, Hes sees all your hurt and pain, and He loves you so much, He will never leave you, even if the whole world leaves you, he wont, you can always count on him! Stay strong! *KISSES*~Corrie 5/5