What do you mean no good ?? I liked it a lot : ) 5/5 from me... great work.. liked every word of it.. the rhyme scheme and the flow of it : ) keep up the good work, I will be reading!!
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Robin

hey girl.....that was wonderful but yet sad poem....excellent job of writing it.....which all ur poems are very very very good :) lov ya :)