g-r-e-a-t poem loved it! write some more so i can read your such it seems like you have a lot goin on!

really great poem. i hope to hear some more. :)

man, you really had a lot in your head when you wrote this, I could hear every word, I heard, pain, fear, lonliness, and heartache, and love.....way to go thats one way of writing, just letting it go, and you did. great job Love ya Bekcy

great poem, but a little short for such a great idea. keep writing.

good poem i can relate read some of mine if you want