by fred May 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Your soul is the death of me, |
i like. 5 |
by erikka baby
I liked this poem, but instead of using "where" you should use "were". That sounds much better. Besides that, very good poem. xX |
by Renee
very dark and vivid. I like the ending. Kinda like your blaming yourself. very well thought out. Great job on this. Keep up the good work. |
by Angie
hey just wanted to say i luved ya poem! Keep up da awesome work! xoxo |