Excellent!
The beginning line itself, "My braun exalts the world as I stand, and I walk my heading rampant since I’d been, a finding posture among hunchbacks whom stare openly, this black sheep whom I give a name."
Starts out incredibly powerful drawing the reader into an in depth and poetic state at an early point in the piece.
Yet another life/society poem written extremely well from you. Your vocabulary was impactful and I loved your unique text and language intertwined with your symbolism and outline.
Wonderful read