Comments : My Blazon Concubine

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Excellent!
    The beginning line itself, "My braun exalts the world as I stand, and I walk my heading rampant since I’d been, a finding posture among hunchbacks whom stare openly, this black sheep whom I give a name."
    Starts out incredibly powerful drawing the reader into an in depth and poetic state at an early point in the piece.
    Yet another life/society poem written extremely well from you. Your vocabulary was impactful and I loved your unique text and language intertwined with your symbolism and outline.
    Wonderful read

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Thanks Alias, I can always count on you to pick apart the virtues of every poem. You're truly one of a kind ;)