Great poem. Very well done, it's amazing.
Take care always,
- Shell.

wow....yet another great poem. I real admire your writing. I wish I could write something like this. Sometimes I feel like I just want to be dark, like, there's an evil lurking inside me that needs to escape. I want to keep reading your poems for inspiration. :) Keep it up! Seriously

I like it of course.....

Genius <333

whoa this poem was awesome, ima add you to my fav's if you dont mind...

wow, that has got to be one of the coolest poems I've ever read. Truely a work of art. Excellent job. <3333

beautiful
i really liked this poem, it was unique and very well written
~kris

EXTREGANT....thats was wonderful...i love it...the image of the words is so real...your words were perfect in describing what you wanted to show...the feeling i get from reading this is completely awsome...i feel as though i were in the arms of someone...like i felt what you wrote...

Sorry if i went in to deep..i just wanted to say that was great ! ! !

(read mine if you wish...they won't be as good at all, but i like to hear how i can improve)

*smiles slightly showing teeth*

*jawdrop* ... *stares in awe* I love your imagination and the way you write your ideas down 5/5

Wow....fantastic work - 5/5!!!!

Hmmm. intresting poem i like that

Wow absolutely amazing wish i could write like that! keep it up!

Twisted, I love it. -T. Jane

In speachless

Thats great. good at the rhyming and it has a great story line. i luved how you ended it.
"once again he kissed me, this time i kissed back, two dark souls together, both evil and black" that was just a perfect finishing for this poem.

That was good!

The poem is captivating...every time i wanted to stop reading...it drew me back into it....this poem has magical powers...dark and sinester....very enjoyable...flows very smoothly...keep it up..."read my Arabian sands" and "Gifts of Sorrow" vote and comments appreciated. 5/5

Very beautiful Poem

I love this...i found the whole idea original and unique in concept. the imagery you created here was beautiful, really creates vivid pictures for the reader. flow was good throughout except for the line 'as he watched my body' no matter which way you pronounce it, body and me dont really rhyme, so that kind of throws the flow. apart from there however, i love this. beautifully dark and elegantly written.

OMG so wickedly insane i cant even believe it so well done unbelivably well done