I absolutely love this poem! :D

Wow you did great with rhyming and the story was just powerful
amazing 5

Love it

Well done !

Nice one..!

I love the twist in this! The exchange of power and finally the almost "dark love story" of it all. I really enjoyed this! :)

Amazing I felt what the the person was feeling very good!!

Woah this gave me chills. I love it. It was amazing to me. I though this was absolutely wonderful. I am into the dark poems so this is one of my new favorites. :) 5/5 from me <3

Ouch man,your a genius

I loved this poem! Although one transition puzzled me... "....he saw right through
My helpless disguise

My smile made him afraid
He thought he was in control..."

Some were along the lines it went from being helpless to smiling. Other than that I loved This poem 5/5

5/5
Brought a smile to my face :)

Absolutely mind blowing cant you literally are a god

Absolutely mind blowing cant you literally are a god

Ferking amaaazing!!!!

Hadn't been on this site in over 8 years, coming back to my favorites and this is still one of my all time favorite poems.