Well it has certainly been a while-about four months I think since you last submitted, glad to see you have.

I really admired it. Not my favorite compared to your previous, but nevertheless well written. I loved this line,
"Jagged wings, bleeding rainbow"
the contrasting beauty fits so well into your symbolism it captivates the reader in a deep poetic stance and sets the beginning for the correct tone proceeding the rest of the piece.
I also enjoyed these lines,
"Strangle me with guitar strings
Look for the right chord
My coronach, will you sing for me
Will you pin the butterfly on the board"
Again, I love your symbolism and how you elaborate off of one meaning to intertwine with the next.
Well done