All OF ME

by Shantell   May 27, 2005


*Thank you for reading my thoughts and feelings. I hope some of you can relate to this. I'm proud of this one. Please vote and comment on it*

Walk, walk. Keep going forward. Head tilted up. No one can break me down now. Pretty white satisfied smile. He wants me. He wants me. Envy is all around. But can you see the darkness that has swelled into my flesh? Pretty brown eyes. Pretty pink lips. Putting me on top of the best.

Cry, cry. This little girl breaking down inside. Sigh, sigh. Exhausted from this long journey home, but I'm far from the finish line.

Cuts have began to appear on my heart. like glass I think I have cracked. Like a crazy person, I don't know how to act. Why do I walk with my head up high? Covering up what I feel inside? Cause no one needs to see No one needs to really know me. But I have to spill my heart out to someone for the fear that it might explode of anger.

Spill... This ink out of this pen. To spill my thoughts onto this paper, and back through my head again. To pour out a song. So that I can sing my emotions gone. Let them go. Can't hold onto this pain and anger any longer. Let them drift on forever. Evaporate into the air. Cause god knows I don't need them here.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ramy medhat

    Great poem,and very nice expression to what you felt inside..i realy like it very much..
    *ramy*

  • 19 years ago

    by Robin

    Wow. that was beautiful.. just amazing. sensational. THere are no words to describe that... it was just.. perfect. You have so much talent, and it expressed so much feeling and emotion that I was reading everyword without blinking.
    5/5 from me, great job
    xox
    Robin
    Ps.- if you get a chance, please check out some of my stuff- thx : ]

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    that was great. it had flow and i could really relate. ir felt like u just wrote it and it just happened to rhyme and stuff, great job. 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Roulin

    Wow that was brilliant. It reli reminded me of the way I think, like on a non stop train of thought. Keep up the good work! :)
    Luv Scarlet xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Patrik

    Excellent, I really liked that poem:) I can relate to how you feel.

    Best wishes,
    Patrik