by Shantell May 27, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I close my eyes but I can still feel you. I open my hand ready to be taken away by you. Is it your color that grabs my attention? How about your shape that has me waiting to touch you. The smooth touch of your clear sky skin, making my epidermis layer want to be wrapped around yours. your eyes over my face tapping upon my pores; wanting to get in. As the wind brushes through the branches of my emotions, the leaves of my feelings fall upon your open palm. And when the sun beams upon my back, it is your gentle touch that makes me calm. Cause i want to place my fingertips upon your lips. And I want to put my head to rest on top your chest. Breath... |
by aaron c s
it was alright. srry but i didnt like it that much. didnt feel like it had flow. and the rhyme scheme didnt really work. i dunno just my opinion. I'll check out your other poems. |