Suicide with a smile

by Robert S. Velez   May 27, 2005


“Suicide with a smile”

An idea we flirt with but never embrace
To cut the veins and watch the blood race
I hold my breath as the thoughts go flying
To be weak in the knees and feel myself dying
Take a gun and bring it to my head
Just so sad, what a shame, I’m dead
So this may seem too real or overbearing
These are the thoughts not worth sharing
So stop looking at me like I said something wrong
I’m just sharing with you the grim reapers song
I look in your eyes and see the word run
You may think this is sick, but I think dying is fun.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    Yeah that is a pretty mint poem, lots of people flirt with the idea and never really do it, like me. but i worked thru my probs, and i hope u do to, it was a really good poem, i gave u 5/5
    xox Bam

  • 19 years ago

    by Dangerous Angels

    ....one word.....wow. This is a real heart felt peace. I've written suicide poems b4 but nothin like this. This really seems to show how u feel. I know how it feels. The rush and sight of blood, the pain u feel to supress emotion. The excitement, the pleasure. It's all so true. If ppl think that ur sick minded then I must be just as bad. I really admire your work and I hope to get inspiration from it. Great work and thanks.

    †Dani†

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